I liked the cartoon feeling you gave this. It seems like it could be a movie. Where city people are suffering from a disease and the evil queen thinks she's better until someone stops her.
This poem has a very interesting ending because it suddenly ends with a girl hurting her knee. This poem reminds me of the movie Oz the Great and Powerful because their is a horrid queen which also wants to take over the world. This story was very original because it includes unknown characters and fascinating nonsense words. Great Blog Post.
Good job. The blog is extremely confusing towards the end. Is she throwing the net? Did the girl hurt her knee while doing it? Or are you just trying to rhyme?
I like how you made like a fairy tale. I don't now why but it reminds me of Cinderella, maybe it is because of the picture. The words you used are very original and different. I agree with Carlos you did give it a cartoon feeling, I liked it.
Your poem is very unique. I'm guessing that it's in the point of view of a princess and I like how it's not the typical glamorous life of a princess, it shows what a real princess does. She sees the people of her land sick, meeting people, etc. Beautiful poem!
I liked the cartoon feeling you gave this. It seems like it could be a movie. Where city people are suffering from a disease and the evil queen thinks she's better until someone stops her.
ReplyDeleteThis poem has a very interesting ending because it suddenly ends with a girl hurting her knee. This poem reminds me of the movie Oz the Great and Powerful because their is a horrid queen which also wants to take over the world. This story was very original because it includes unknown characters and fascinating nonsense words. Great Blog Post.
ReplyDeleteGood job. The blog is extremely confusing towards the end. Is she throwing the net? Did the girl hurt her knee while doing it? Or are you just trying to rhyme?
ReplyDeleteI like how you made like a fairy tale. I don't now why but it reminds me of Cinderella, maybe it is because of the picture. The words you used are very original and different. I agree with Carlos you did give it a cartoon feeling, I liked it.
ReplyDeleteGood job I like the ending. I like the castle in the background which helps with the imagery of the poem.
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Your poem is very unique. I'm guessing that it's in the point of view of a princess and I like how it's not the typical glamorous life of a princess, it shows what a real princess does. She sees the people of her land sick, meeting people, etc. Beautiful poem!
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