Tuesday, October 8, 2013
"The Lady or the Tiger" True Love's Fate
Without the slightest hesitation, he went to the door on the right, and opened it. The whole audience stopped, no one took a breath. The princess stopped also, she knew who or what he picked. Her love was gone. She grew with frustration and screamed. The wedding bells started ringing, the audience started clapping. The young man smiled with relief, but looked back at his true lover, seeing that she really cared. The woman behind the door grabbed the young man, and they walked down the aisle. The young man resisted, but he couldn't do anything to the damsel. The princess looked at her father, and started sobbing.
She lost her love, forever. At that very moment, the young man ran away from the damsel, and he went to the princess. The damsel was so furious. She decided to go follow him, and found him with the princess. She pushed him out into the arena, and opened the door with the tiger in it. The tiger ruined the whole wedding ceremony, and cornered the young man. The young man so so shocked! He didn't know what to do, but say goodbye to everyone.
At the last second, the audience froze. No one moved, there was a loud shriek coming from the audience. It was the princess! She distracted the tiger, and the man put the damsel in front of the tiger. The damsel was gone! Then King was also in the arena trying to get the tiger to go away, but nothing good came out of that. He's gone too. The princess had nothing holding her back for her love. She ran into the young man's arms, and the whole audience was cheering for them. The princess and the young man lived happily ever after.
The young man and princess grew, and had children. One boy and one girl. They were so blessed and very happy. Just remember, she is semi barbaric. She has kids, and those kids had a grandfather. The children will grow, and they won't be perfect. The son will do something terrible, and he will have a court date. Who will he choose, the lady or the tiger?
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Amelia,
ReplyDeleteI thought is was cool how you had an action scene in paragraph three. It was funny because in both of our stories the lady is fed to the tiger. I have a question, how did the princess get away with the man if the king was still alive?
He died in the story, it's in paragraph 3. :)
DeleteThe action was so alive! I really enjoyed reading this, everything seemed so sudden. Amelia, this was a great twist!
ReplyDeleteDear Amelia,
ReplyDeleteI loved how much emotion you put in the story. I can tell you put a lot of thought and effort into it. I also like the twist at the end.
Amelia,
ReplyDeleteI love the emotion and it's nicely written.