Divergent: Tris and Four
I didn’t need your help, I was fine.
Really? You don’t look fine.
It’s just a black eye and a limp.
It’s nothing that serious.
Please take off your mask.
Mask?
You can tell.
No!
Please stop. I just need
to get some rest.
Not some. A lot.
Well, thanks for this useless
conversation.
I care about you and I want you
to be safe. Oh. Did I just say that?
Yes you did, and thanks I guess.
See ya!
Oh. I guess I’ll talk to you later.
Do you want to come with me?
Ummmm. I can’t, I have to rest.
Oh.
I have to go now.
Ok. I have to meet up with them anyway.
Bye!
Oh, ummmm.
Good blog. You fogot to say who is speaking, but I'm guessing it's just Tris and Four. I like how you used a scene from the book but used your own words to recreate it. Nice job over all.
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Amelia - I like how you start your poem, but you're 10 lines short for each character.
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